Friday, 9 May 2014

the smash fence

WALT. recount an exciting event so that our reader knows what happened and how we 

On Saturday my cousin left the car in  neutral  at home. It started to roll then I heard a big boof! Then I looked outside and saw a whole lot of wood all around  our property. It was  a massive mess. His car smashed into our fence. I was worried that my brother might have been run over.  Luckily he didn't. Then my cousin came out of his garage and got some spare wood out. Then my dad went in his garage and got his hammer and they fixed the fence. Now our fence is nice and fancy.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Ezekiel from Mrs Morgan-French. This is an exciting event to write about. I can tell when the accident happened that you felt really concerned about your brother. It looks like you achieved the WALT. Tu meke.